Change the narrative style by using direct speeches.

Mr. Kalam said to the bank manager, “ May I get in, sir?” “Yes, come in,” said the bank manager. Mr. Kalam said, “I want to open a bank account.” The manager said, “What type of account will you open?” “ I want to open a savings account, “said Mr. Kalam. “Please go to the front desk. The officer will help you.” "Thank you very much," Mr. Kalam said.

Mr. Kalam politely asked the bank manager if he (K) might get in. Replying positively, the manager told him (K) to go in. Mr. Kalam told him that he (K) wanted to open a bank account. Hearing this, the manager asked him (K) what type of account he (K) would open. Mr. Kalam replied that he (K) wanted to open a savings account. Then the manager told him (K) to go to the front desk and added that the officer would help him (K). Finally, Mr. Kalam thanked the manager very much.